miƩrcoles, 7 de mayo de 2008

PRESENTATION

good morning my name is maricela rodriguez, i'm a student from the ipn to te carrer of comertial relations, majoring in bussines this carrer teaches all you have to know about the comerzalitation of any pruduct or service and it also helps to another areas, the most important part for me is the publicity because it's what i like i work for microsoff in the publicity area, my job is create ideas about how to help the company to generate a positive image to the public anorher part in my job is make publicity in diferent ways to the company.microsoff started with the idea of a young man, bill gates, he create the firs operative system and called windows in the currently windows is the most important operative system that exists and microsoff creates a lot of programs that helps many companies and persons.
As you can see in this graf microsoof increase its sales in the last year, in ten% for example between January and april there and increase of 2% and from june to august there is an increase of 3%.
i think taht microsoff will continue incresing its sales and it will become in one of the most important companies in the historiy, because as you know now everyone has a computer at home or in the work and the technology is one of the most important parts in the industrie.

1 comentario:

Brenda LoPotro dijo...

I'm a student

to te carrer of comertial relations, majoring in Business

This career teaches

i like to me. - Leave out "to me"

Microsoft

job is to create
ideas how help to - ideas about how to help the company

M started...he created the first
operating system and called
You need to use past tense here.

in the actuality - currently

operating system that exists

helps to - omit "to"

continue
increasing its sales
history

Your presentation is very short. Add to it.